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Wednesday, March 22, 2006

TKV - Ephesians 2:8

The TKV translates: "ព្រះអង្គ​សង្គ្រោះ​បង​ប្អូន​មក​ពី​ព្រះ​អង្គ​មាន​ព្រះ​ហឫទ័យ​ប្រណី​សន្តោស​ដោយ​សារ​បង​ប្អូន​មាន​ជំនឿ។ ការ​សង្រ្គោះ​មិន​មែន​មក​ពី​បង​ប្អូន​ទេ​ គឺ​ជា​ព្រះ​អំណោយ​ទាន​របស់​ព្រះជាម្ចាស់"

I believe this translation has major problems, being in that there are possessive and descriptive words in the Khmer that are not in the original Greek.

I will do my best to work through the verse systematically as I see problems.

1) "ព្រះអង្គ​សង្គ្រោះ​បង​ប្អូន​" - this word might be confused to mean "your Savior" rather than "God saved you".

2) "មក​ពី​ព្រះ​អង្គ​មាន​ព្រះ​ហឫទ័យ​ប្រណី​សន្តោស" I understand this version is trying to keep things simple, I will only say I don't think this is a good translation of the word "χάρις" - but more on that in the future (or maybe someone else has thoughts on this?)

3) "ដោយ​សារ​បង​ប្អូន​មាន​ជំនឿ" I would say this is one of the major parts of the problem in this verse. In the Greek "πιστεως" [faith in most English Bibles] does not belong to a person or is not possessed by the person - it is just "faith" by itself, no one with it.

4) "ការ​សង្រ្គោះ​មិន​មែន​មក​ពី​បង​ប្អូន​ទេ​" Again, major problems because the text does not say "Salvation does not come from you" rather it says "και 2532[AND] τουτο 5124[THIS] ουκ 3756[NOT] εξ 1537[OF] υμων 5216[YOURSELVES]"

The word "τουτο" in Greek refers back to the whole previous clause "For by grace you have been saved through faith" not only to "σεσωσμενοι" [most translate as "saved"].

I believe by inserting "ការ​សង្រ្គោះ​" the translation has gone too far outside the original Greek text and limits its meaning.

So with all this being said I suggest the following re-translation (in keeping with the philosophy of the TKV translators, I will leave most of it as they have translated):

"ព្រះអង្គ​បាន​សង្គ្រោះ​​បង​ប្អូន​មក​ពី​ព្រះ​អង្គ​មាន​ព្រះ​ហឫទ័យ​ប្រណី​សន្តោស​ដោយ​សារ​ជំនឿ ហើយ​ការ​នេះ​ក៏​​មិន​មែន​មក​ពី​បង​ប្អូន​ទេ​ គឺ​ជា​ព្រះ​អំណោយ​ទាន​របស់​ព្រះជាម្ចាស់"

If you have additional thoughts - please feel free to comment.

1 Comments:

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